很多同學(xué)都想知道申請(qǐng)GRE獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金的流程是什么樣的，原本美嘉導(dǎo)師想給同學(xué)們介紹一下流程，可是后來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)重要的是要寫出完美的GRE獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金申請(qǐng)書，所以小編就給同學(xué)們找來(lái)了GRE獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金申請(qǐng)的范文，好的GRE獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金申請(qǐng)文章在申請(qǐng)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金過程中所起的作用遠(yuǎn)超過托福和GRE。下面就是導(dǎo)師為大家準(zhǔn)備的范文：

Growing up in a modest village in China，I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology;people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking water and use ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisions and personal computers。 But when my father gave me an old radio to play with，I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraption and see what inside made such interesting sounds。Sitting on the floor with a confused grin，surrounded by wires and metal，　I looked up at my father and asked where the noises were。。。(有刪節(jié))

美嘉導(dǎo)師表示,合理地闡述了申請(qǐng)者學(xué)習(xí)電子工程的動(dòng)機(jī)，學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)機(jī)是評(píng)審委員非?？粗械?。同時(shí)，GRE獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金評(píng)審委員讀了這段文字，會(huì)使他們沉浸在對(duì)童年往事的美好回憶里，借此打動(dòng)他們的心。

另外一篇修改過的文章開頭用詩(shī)一般的語(yǔ)言寫道(有刪節(jié))：

I first read this paragraph from Madame Curie as a 14-year-old child，　and I still remember how wonderful I felt。 I remember thinking，"What esteemed men they were!How hard they worked!" As I grew older，this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity。I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart，kindling a love of science，and encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world。

結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)了開頭，闡述了作者為什么要去美國(guó)讀書：

I never forgot my adolescent idol，Maria Curie。As I re-read the book，another passage leaped out："She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries。。Maria took the train from Warsaw to Paris，the intellectual Mecca。"

For me，the intellectual Mecca is the United States。。。。 I hope to continue my study and research，as detailed below。One day，I hope to find the pure esthetics of biology and reach its luminous summits。

美嘉導(dǎo)師提示：給同學(xué)們準(zhǔn)備的GRE獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金申請(qǐng)范文，同學(xué)們覺得怎么樣？是不是對(duì)你有點(diǎn)啟發(fā)呢，不是每個(gè)人都得當(dāng)科學(xué)家才有辦法得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金，同學(xué)們要學(xué)習(xí)的是寫作的技巧，怎么才能準(zhǔn)確的找到評(píng)審委員的軟肋，只要找到，你就成功了，同學(xué)們加油！